The feedback we got from dan on our first rough cut was that, it was a good attempt for the first rough cut, however he said that we had a lot to improve on, for example he told us by the second rough-cut we should include sound both the soundtrack and foley sounds to make our opening title sequence more strong and powerful, so that the audience understands that particular moments in the movie are meant to stand out and gain all the attention.
He also told us that the title credits was all over the page and that there was not a particular section where they all appeared as well as, one of the title credits covering the face of one of the actors (the editing title credit where my name, ogos, Lindeys and Jakubs name was presented one after another in chunks). He told us to fix this by the second rough-cut. The last constructive criticism Dan made was that we had a lot of blank spaces, we told him that we did not film those sections, he then told us to film them and at least have more shots in the second rough-cut.
- To improve my work i will redo the title credits and make sure that they are organised and are placed correctly on our displayed work (moving image).
- As a group we will try and improve in creating music by using Garage Band, also to create and use Foley sounds in our opening title sequence.
- I will also do the editing and complete at least more filming to fill in the blank screen with the footage which we will take.
- Seren Esmanoglu
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