Post Production:Finalised story Line

Our Original synopsis of our film was about a boy called Eznho who could go into his own dreams and live his life through them. Having being advised to alter our storyline and its content as it its too complicated to portray we went forward with the risk of doing so. Throughout the whole process we didn't find it hard filming aspects of our storyline as we were previously told however our storyline did alter. We hadn't stuck to every aspect of our story board. Examples of our new content including, the bathroom scene where Eznho goes into he dream and the scene were Eznho and his adopted sister has a brief encounter with each other.

Looking over my story line i am beginning to see plot holes in our storyline. The relationship between Eznho and his adopted sister isnt clear. The two interactions don't display that the two are related. We could shown this through maybe more dialogue by using the word 'mum or dad'. This is also the same concept with Serilda and Eznho no established relation is seen between the two.